Friday, July 10, 2009
A Corpse Named Hope.
Many a day we see the hell come down,
Little things that make people frown,
Has anyone seen the face behind the clown?
Even a King has a turbulence brewing under His crown!
Tragedy swirls like a tornadoes tip,
It hits and gives the happy days a little flip,
And luck packs up to go on a long flight,
But remember there is day waiting to be up after the night!
Days pass but you can’t get the brain thinking upright,
And you and your insides have a constant fight,
Hope even seems to be a distant sight,
And you feel if there is anything that can make you bright!
Many age old biological revolutions,
Have brought umpteen revelations,
That a smile can shun, the sadness,
And bring back all the fun.
Sulking for the things in the past,
Will only make your troubles vast,
One would be dead for a whole eternity,
But be alive on the earth for a brief moment!
[Dedicated to Dido for her song "Lets do the things we normally do" and to all those who are in search of sunnier days.
Credits: To "Lilya -4-Ever" for providing the last two sentences of the poem.]
Posted by pawan at Friday, July 10, 2009
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21 Comments:
This poem really is ....BEAUTIFUL!!!...I especially loved the last two lines.......this poem brings a little something more, for me.....maybe bcoz even i am looking 4 "sunnier dayz".....i am still fighting with the pain of losing someone very close.....But seriously, this poem has got soul....LOVED IT!!...Keep It Going...
Beautiful poem, indeed!
... and the pic was very apt, too!
P.S. You have been tagged yet again!
Check out my latest post: "More tags... One down, 2 more to go!" for further info...
Another good one dude.....
keep writing...... as always....... :)
That's a beautiful and sensitive poem! And a very good one indeed!
Keep penning such verses!
hey very good rhyming poem.... you are a great thinker it seems... great man.. try to write more da...in future...
OMG! This was beautiful Pawan!
You sure write some of the most amazing poems....
Thanks! Leaves me Smiling! Future! here I come!
u rock u rule!!
what more can i say??
muaah..ur too gud ra!!
hey pawan a gud one dude..
newez i hv a question.. r u d same pawan who once lft this msg on my chatbox:
9 Jun 09, 21:36
Pawan: Hey! Nice blog! I love lengthy meaningful posts and I fell in love with your blog! Expect detailed comments for each post soon!! Cheers!
In case u r, thn buddy 4 d last 1 mnth i'v been waiting 4 those detailed comments.. don't brk my heart like this;)
nice...
once again u hav proved yourself.indeed its fantastic.
hey pawan thnx 4 appreciating my poem on my blog bt u r being jus too humble.. the vry frst verse of this poem of urs is so amazing tht evn if u hd posted just those 4 lines, it wud hav been a marvel.. this learning is jus mutual u c.. cheers:)
@ Anusha: Glad you liked my poem!
@ Roshmi: Thanks again for dropping by and the picture credit goes to Flickr!
@ Apurv aka Rick : Its your love that keeps me going!
@ Shilpa: I will continue the work as long your support is there for my blog!
@ Shankar: Will write more man! It's you who should read!
@ Choco: Thanks!. I was expecting you to comment first but anyhow I'm glad that you commented!
@ Jithin: Thats the spirit mate!
@ NAren: That's enough for me man!
You pamper me too much!
outstanding......
i can't say anythiing more.....
it has got a lot of meaning.....
u rock pawan......
i won't rate this poem....may be my rating degrades it....
simply superb
first time into your blog and i am hooked :) loved the ending..
One would be dead for a whole eternity,
But be alive on the earth for a brief moment! Well said, truly.
@ Vipul: Can i disagree with you?
@ Anil: Thanks man! It's your supports that drives me ahead!
@ Anusha: Thanks for dropping by! Welcome to my blog and hope you visit again!
Yours is one of the best blog I have seen around in terms of content!
Keep writing and spread the cheer!
brilliant poem!!!
and forgot : u r tagged too!
Hey Pawan,
I'm visiting your blog for the first time. Its a beautiful poem and the language is quite commendable. Loved it.
You certainly have a way with the pictures too :)
lovely !
i read three of ur poems... and found that u write on the darker side ! and all of them are very intense !
i cannot find the labels gadget on ur blog. wanted to see all ur poems together. :(
@ Mou: Thanks! And as for the labels gadget, it is right below my blog roll!
Do check again!
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